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اختي كاتبه هالخاطره شوفولها القرامر فيه اذا ماعليكم امر
قالت لي شوفي المنتدى يمكن يساعدون .. وجيتكم ابي الفزعه
الخاطره هي:
JUST FOR YOU
I love you more than words could ever say
I feel it growing in my heart each and every day
All this love I feel
You give me something no one has ever given me
Love so strong, and so true
It makes me think of only you
This wonderful feeling you have given me
Makes me want to be with you
I love the way you let me know
How much you love me so
I love how much you care
I hate to see you mad
I hate to see you sad
It makes me feel so bad
What you feel, I feel
You feel my pain
You feel what I feel inside
That's because our love is real
I love the real you inside
I love you with all my heart
Don't worry you're the only one for me
That no one can ever take your place
No one could ever make us part
I will never leave you
وتقول جاها رد على خاطرتها اللي هي هذي:
You gave me something no one has ever given me
I love the real you inside
if you mean you love the real man inside him it will be ok
otherwise
you can say i love the reality in you
I love you with all my heart
it would be much better if u said
i love you from the bottom of my heart
That no one can ever take your place
No one could ever make us apart
you should say apart instead of part
and the first part of sentence in present tense and the second part in the past tense
you can use would or will
one tense for the whole sentence
That no one would ever take your place
انا لو افهم بالانجليزي كان ساعدتهاا
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