فقرة عن اي مهنة

السلام عليكم .. احتاج للمساعدة في تصحيح الفقرة الي كتبتها .. الفقرة الاولى عن الاطفائي طلبوا منا كتابة فقرة عن مهنة غيرها وبتفاصيل اكبر وانا كتبت فقرة الدكتور واحتاج لتصحيحها .. ويعطيها العافية الي بتساعدني
Firefighters work shifts. Their job is dangerous and difficult and they dont get good salaries. However, it is a rewarding job as they save peoples lives.They have to be physically fit,calm and brave.
A doctor word indoor,also usually he is work full-time.Doctoe meet patients and diagnosing thir health problems then heal they.
The medicine need more of kind of doctors.For each doctor have specialist,such as heart specialist ,or eye specialist ..etc.. Each doctor meet his patients and give they prescriptions to heal them.
Also doctors job get good salaries.however it is arewarding job as they save peoples live and keep they health . The doctor must be intelligent,he also have to be caring,skilful an polite.