My First Poem

Assalamu Alaikum Ladies ,How are you? This is my first participation in this lovely forum i wish of you would read my first poem which i wrote it 1 year ago and i ll be very happy to hear your comments .........
INNOCENSE
An angle flying with its glittery wings
Spreding its glitter to the surroundings
Some may like it,,,,Ssome may not
Who like it,,they know it will affect them
Because it will change them to be pure
Within them selves............
Who wont like it they wont feel it
Simply they dont understand the spiritual meaning of it
And some of them try to throw arrows back to it
It reaches and hurts deeply and the Angle falls.............
For some time...........
And stands up to spread the glitter again
But carefully......... :
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