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08-10-2022 - 01:53 am
اعضاء منتدانا الغالي والغالي والغالي...الخ
هذي تعابير ابغى تصححونها لي
عندي امتحان نهائي ومبتلشه بعمري
راح انزل التعابير ابغى تدققون على(الاخطاء اللغوية _والعنوان شامل على الموضوع او لا )
هذا التعبير الأول عن
my neighborhood(وصف)
أحتاج إلى تدقيق لغوي
my name is ....... i'm from jeddah,but now i live in riyadh . i'm a student here in
english language classes at a small college.
i live in a small house . my address is 4401 noble street . there are a lot of oak trees in the park.
the trees are beautiful in the summer. i have a lot of neigborhood.
the people next to me are from egypt . the family across from the egyptian family is from kuwait.
the stores in this neighborhood are always busy.
there's a lebnan drugstore and a sorey flower shop .i like my neighborhood .
الثاني
أحتاج إلى تدقيق وجمل زيادة
..
big cities _ favorite city
my favorite city is riyadh .riyadh is capital of saudi arabian .i like riyadh for several
reasons .first,i born in riyadh.
secondly ,all my family live in riyadh .it has many park.
you can go to any park and take some relax and watch many pople sit and play . first,live in city adventure
الثالث/
احتاج تدقيق و زيادة كلمات
some problems in your city _ why the population is so big in on city
the population is so big in riyadh city.
riyadh has a population of 5 million people.
because the services is available in city more then Villages. for example , airports,schools,universities,market and parks . also
there is on metro . finally i don't like crowded city
الرابع...
|احتاج تدقيق
healthy
nobody wants to be sick . everyone wants to be healthy,and most people want to have a long life,too.
but a healthy body is not enough . we all want both physical and mental health.
what can we do to stay well?most of us know some thing to do . it,s a good idea to exercise(fo example,in a gym).eat fruit,vegetables,
minerals,fish and drink lots of water.
we also know things not to do,it,s a bad idea to eat a lot of junk food,such as chips,ice cream,candy,donuts,and
other foods with sugar or fat.it's a bad idea to be a couch potato- a person who
watches a lot of tv and doesn't exercise.it's
aterrible idea to smok.but scientists noe have new information a bout other
ways to stay healthy.some of it is surprising
الخامس
احتاج تدقيق وكلمات زيادة
shopping online
online shopping easy to use . but you need a computer
many people like online shopping . becase it saves time.
online shopping is a lot of fun . some people
don't like online shopping for several reasons.
first,it expensive.
secondly,can not see the product very well.
Finally, more and more people are shopping online
والحين احتاج إلى تعبير عن shopping _تغير الاسر في المملكة العربية السعودية_مضار الاكل السريع(غير صحي)
آه اول مره ادخل جامعة واخر مره توبه
وإذا تتوقعون تعبير من روسكم ذبوه هنا خلونا نحفظ لعل الله يرزقنا الدرجات الرفيعه
الوحدات عن
الجيران.المدن.التسوق.العائلة والاصدقاء,الصحة
أي توقع يخطر في بالكم قولو
ترى اتقبل اي تعبير
كل شىء جايز
واللي يرد ربي يرفع من مقداره ويوفقه دنيا واخره وله احلا الدعوات من قلب صادق
في انتظاركم
دعواتكم
لحد يدخل إلا يرد
هذي تعابير ابغى تصححونها لي
عندي امتحان نهائي ومبتلشه بعمري
راح انزل التعابير ابغى تدققون على(الاخطاء اللغوية _والعنوان شامل على الموضوع او لا )
هذا التعبير الأول عن
my neighborhood(وصف)
أحتاج إلى تدقيق لغوي
my name is ....... i'm from jeddah,but now i live in riyadh . i'm a student here in
english language classes at a small college.
i live in a small house . my address is 4401 noble street . there are a lot of oak trees in the park.
the trees are beautiful in the summer. i have a lot of neigborhood.
the people next to me are from egypt . the family across from the egyptian family is from kuwait.
the stores in this neighborhood are always busy.
there's a lebnan drugstore and a sorey flower shop .i like my neighborhood .
الثاني
أحتاج إلى تدقيق وجمل زيادة
..
big cities _ favorite city
my favorite city is riyadh .riyadh is capital of saudi arabian .i like riyadh for several
reasons .first,i born in riyadh.
secondly ,all my family live in riyadh .it has many park.
you can go to any park and take some relax and watch many pople sit and play . first,live in city adventure
الثالث/
احتاج تدقيق و زيادة كلمات
some problems in your city _ why the population is so big in on city
the population is so big in riyadh city.
riyadh has a population of 5 million people.
because the services is available in city more then Villages. for example , airports,schools,universities,market and parks . also
there is on metro . finally i don't like crowded city
الرابع...
|احتاج تدقيق
healthy
nobody wants to be sick . everyone wants to be healthy,and most people want to have a long life,too.
but a healthy body is not enough . we all want both physical and mental health.
what can we do to stay well?most of us know some thing to do . it,s a good idea to exercise(fo example,in a gym).eat fruit,vegetables,
minerals,fish and drink lots of water.
we also know things not to do,it,s a bad idea to eat a lot of junk food,such as chips,ice cream,candy,donuts,and
other foods with sugar or fat.it's a bad idea to be a couch potato- a person who
watches a lot of tv and doesn't exercise.it's
aterrible idea to smok.but scientists noe have new information a bout other
ways to stay healthy.some of it is surprising
الخامس
احتاج تدقيق وكلمات زيادة
shopping online
online shopping easy to use . but you need a computer
many people like online shopping . becase it saves time.
online shopping is a lot of fun . some people
don't like online shopping for several reasons.
first,it expensive.
secondly,can not see the product very well.
Finally, more and more people are shopping online
والحين احتاج إلى تعبير عن shopping _تغير الاسر في المملكة العربية السعودية_مضار الاكل السريع(غير صحي)
آه اول مره ادخل جامعة واخر مره توبه
وإذا تتوقعون تعبير من روسكم ذبوه هنا خلونا نحفظ لعل الله يرزقنا الدرجات الرفيعه
الوحدات عن
الجيران.المدن.التسوق.العائلة والاصدقاء,الصحة
أي توقع يخطر في بالكم قولو
ترى اتقبل اي تعبير
كل شىء جايز
واللي يرد ربي يرفع من مقداره ويوفقه دنيا واخره وله احلا الدعوات من قلب صادق
في انتظاركم
دعواتكم
لحد يدخل إلا يرد
التعليقات (3)
دروس باللغة الانجليزية مهمه→
English department in a small college.
I live in a small house . My address is 4401 noble street . There are a lot of oak trees in the park.
The trees are beautiful in the summer. I have a lot of neighbors.
The people next to me are from Egypt . The family across the Egyptian family is from Kuwait.
the stores in this neighborhood are always crowded.
There's a Lebanese drugstore and a Syrian flower shop . I like my neighborhood .
الثاني
..
Big Cities _ Favorite City
My favorite city is Riyadh . It is capital of Saudi Arabia. I like Riyadh because I born in it.
Also, my family lives in here . There are many parks.
you can go to any park to relax and watch many people sit and play . Living in a city adventure.
الثالث/
...
Some Problems in Your City _ Why Population is so Big in on City?
Population is so big in Riyadh city.
Riyadh's population has grown to over 5 millions, because many services are available than the villages. For example, airports, schools, universities, market and parks. Also, there is one metro . Finally, I don't like crowded cities.
Health
Of course, everyone wants to be healthy ,and most people want to have a long life too.
A healthy body is not enough, but we all want both physical and mental health.
what can we do to be well? We know the good things that we should do such as exercising, eating fruit, vegetables, minerals, fish and drinking a lot of water. Also, we know the bad things that we should not do such as eating junk food which are full of fats and carbohydrates. it's a bad idea to be a couch potato- a person who
watches TV alot and doesn't exercise. It's
a terrible idea to smoke. Now, scientists have new information about other
ways to stay healthy .some of them are amazing.
الخامس
...
Shopping Online
Online shopping is easy to use . You need a computer to use this technology.
Many people like online shopping because it saves time.
online shopping is so funny . some people
don't like online shopping for several reasons because it's expensive.
Also, you cannot see the product very well. Finally, more and more people are shopping online