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*ManoOl*
21-05-2022 - 02:49 am
هلا بنات ,,
How are you all ??
هذي poem ألفتها و أبي رايكم ,,
ما أطوول عليكم ,,
تفضلو ,,
\\\
for some reson ..
i feel like am drowning..
in an ocean of pains ..
i know that i could save my self..
but ..
am waiting for you to save me..
to pick me up..
to make me breathe again..
don't say it's too late..
it will never be too late..
am just ,, wondering..
if this life gonna change us..
i always said i will never change..
i will still me ..
but..nobody knows..
whats gonna happen
no body knows.
but i know one thing..
and i believe in one thing ..
that my words are ture..
and my hreat never lie to me..
i believe in that ,,
and it's enough for me ,,
\\
هاه يلا بليز اللي يدخل يرد و يعلق و يعطيني رايه ,,
أستنى ردودكم ,,
أدري ما لذيك الدرجة ,, بس يالله ترا أول محاولة لي ,,
دمتو بحفظ الرحمن ,,
How are you all ??
هذي poem ألفتها و أبي رايكم ,,
ما أطوول عليكم ,,
تفضلو ,,
\\\
for some reson ..
i feel like am drowning..
in an ocean of pains ..
i know that i could save my self..
but ..
am waiting for you to save me..
to pick me up..
to make me breathe again..
don't say it's too late..
it will never be too late..
am just ,, wondering..
if this life gonna change us..
i always said i will never change..
i will still me ..
but..nobody knows..
whats gonna happen
no body knows.
but i know one thing..
and i believe in one thing ..
that my words are ture..
and my hreat never lie to me..
i believe in that ,,
and it's enough for me ,,
\\
هاه يلا بليز اللي يدخل يرد و يعلق و يعطيني رايه ,,
أستنى ردودكم ,,
أدري ما لذيك الدرجة ,, بس يالله ترا أول محاولة لي ,,
دمتو بحفظ الرحمن ,,
التعليقات (9)
very unique words
expressed how warm and deep feelings u have
keep going
Regards
expressed how warm and deep feelings u have
keep going
Regards
Thanx for all who replay //
am wait for the others ,,
you make me feel so good by your replays ,,
thanx aloooooooot \\
am wait for the others ,,
you make me feel so good by your replays ,,
thanx aloooooooot \\
of course
your start was good
word were easy and wonderful
your start was good
word were easy and wonderful
*ManoOl*
I really like what you wrote there sweetie.
though I believe you did a better job in the first six lines than the rest of the poem .. anyhow I have few comments although i find your wordss smooth and real nice .
1. i know that i could save my self.
I really like what you wrote there sweetie.
though I believe you did a better job in the first six lines than the rest of the poem .. anyhow I have few comments although i find your wordss smooth and real nice .
1. i know that i could save my self.
supposed to be " I know i CAN save myself" as you said you are drawning in the beginning .
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don't stop wrote
I wish to see your new at future
best wishes