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bent Al-Riyadh
13-11-2022 - 05:04 am
Hi butterflies
How are you
I am going to put passage I wrote it
I hope you like it.
i think the passage will be interesting
and please if there is any mistake correct for me.
People irritate me
Every one has good qualities and bad qualities. There are many people irritate me by their bad behavior or dealings. The most people whom irritate me are backbiters, their aim just to get another people’s news then spread the news. I think those people whom like to backbiting have problems in their personality. The other thing that irritate me is ignorant people whom have no idea about the matters and like to talk about them. For example , when the internet appeared some ignorant people confused between the internet itself and chatting. They think the internet is chatting. They have just negative idea about internet for that they confronting it. The last thing I would like to talk about is people whom like to embarrass another people. I really hate those people also, I do not like to embarrass any body because I imagine that I am in her(his) stance.
How are you
I am going to put passage I wrote it
I hope you like it.
i think the passage will be interesting
and please if there is any mistake correct for me.
People irritate me
Every one has good qualities and bad qualities. There are many people irritate me by their bad behavior or dealings. The most people whom irritate me are backbiters, their aim just to get another people’s news then spread the news. I think those people whom like to backbiting have problems in their personality. The other thing that irritate me is ignorant people whom have no idea about the matters and like to talk about them. For example , when the internet appeared some ignorant people confused between the internet itself and chatting. They think the internet is chatting. They have just negative idea about internet for that they confronting it. The last thing I would like to talk about is people whom like to embarrass another people. I really hate those people also, I do not like to embarrass any body because I imagine that I am in her(his) stance.
التعليقات (8)
hi cute
thanks for your answer :
i think i have mistake
They have just negative idea about internet for that they confronting it
they are confronting or with out are just confront
i`m waiting for your answers
bye bye
thanks for your answer :
i think i have mistake
They have just negative idea about internet for that they confronting it
they are confronting or with out are just confront
i`m waiting for your answers
bye bye
I think there are alot of grammatical mistakes in your article. also your style is weak. I think you should improve your writing style by reading some writhing books. Don't get upset. Any way the topic is interesting.
An English teacher
An English teacher
bent Al-Riyadh
hellooo bent-alriyadh
and welcome my dear
it's better to use the sipmle present
they confront it
goodbye
.
hellooo bent-alriyadh
and welcome my dear
it's better to use the sipmle present
they confront it
goodbye
.
As a first thing, to write in English is a courageous thing to do . Thus, i give you thum up for doing it.
the second thing, is that there are "as my fellow butterflies said" grammatical mistakes and the paragraph it self is kind of weak . You can " as Amaly&Amany said" improve your writing skills by reading not only writing books , but also reading books"like novels or short stories".
The third thing, is that your topic is so great and i agree that , that kind of people iretate me as well. However, sometimes we have to deal with such people don't we?
sorry for the long explaination, i hope you don't get bored of it.
salam Sister Bent Al Riadh
the second thing, is that there are "as my fellow butterflies said" grammatical mistakes and the paragraph it self is kind of weak . You can " as Amaly&Amany said" improve your writing skills by reading not only writing books , but also reading books"like novels or short stories".
The third thing, is that your topic is so great and i agree that , that kind of people iretate me as well. However, sometimes we have to deal with such people don't we?
sorry for the long explaination, i hope you don't get bored of it.
salam Sister Bent Al Riadh
أملي وأماني
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Hi املي وأماني
First
Thanks alot for your answer teacher but i do not know where are the mistakes
it is better to correct
the other thing that i`ve just passed first year in college
for that
i`m concern just on simple style till i get better
I did my best
bye bye
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Hi املي وأماني
First
Thanks alot for your answer teacher but i do not know where are the mistakes
it is better to correct
the other thing that i`ve just passed first year in college
for that
i`m concern just on simple style till i get better
I did my best
bye bye
My Mother→
for your effort
the only solution
((( ignore them )))
don't think that it's weakness or negativeness
but we don't have time
to talk with them about silly things
.