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صححوا لي (( الموضوع نكتب مشكلة وحلول مقترحه عنها والحل اللي اعتقد انه صح والخاتمه))
هذا موضوعي...:
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. Skin is one of the most important part in the bady.women care its a lot. there are many sources the skin especially the sun.
Sun is necessary in our life. It gives us the light and energy. But it contains dangers rays like UNB and UNA.
(I have probelm with sun especially during the work (study in unvirsty
I hate hot weather and i feel headache.
My mother deviced me to ues umbrella . My sister told me to cover my face and try to stay far of sun.
واقي شمس Also, my friend deviced me to ues
واقي I read in web put milk befor a
for along time واقي becoues milk save
واقي الشمس I belive to use umbreall, covering and
are goog to prevent sun induced skin damage and dryness
I hope to save my skin from sun.
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Skin or complexion is one of the important parts of our bodies. Most of women take care greatly of their complexions. Hence, there are many things affecting the complexion harmfully, especially sun rays.The sun is a necessary source to our health in our lives. lt gives us light and energy, but it contains dangerous rays such asUNB and UNA. l have a problem with the sun during my studying in the university; l don't like hot weather and l have always got aheadache. My mother advised me to use umbrella while walking outdoors.My sister advised me to cover my face with a veil and stayaway from the sunny places , too. As well as my friend advised me to use a protective cream against the harmful rays of the sun. l have read in the web about a mask; putting milk on the face ,before massaging with the skin protective cream, which will nourish and smoothen the complexion for a long time. l believe that using an umbrella, covering the face with a light veil,using a skin protective creme guarantee maintaining the complexion . They :d6de191e7

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مش كوره ..... 100,000,000,000 مره
الله يسعدك... ويحقق لك اللي في بالك...
فرحتيني الله يفرح قلبك... ويحلي أيامك

موضوعك رائع ولا يعلي عليه ماشاء الله عليكي...
بس بسم الله عليكي تستخدمين كلمات صعبه شوي...!!!!
بس في هذا المقطع والباقي روعه وسهل ويجنن....تسلم ايدك الحلوه
ممكن تجيبن لي كلمات بنفس المعنى ..... مثلا:
l have read in the web about a mask; putting milk on the face ,before (put)massaging with the skin protective cream, which will ( stay) nourish and smoothen the complexion for a long time. l believe that using an umbrella, covering the face with a light veil,using a skin protective creme guarantee (keep) maintaining the complexion .
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آسفه على ثقالة الدم.... واذا ماتبغين تغيرينها... عادي والله
اصلا انتي سويتي اللي عليكي وأكثر...
ترا خجلانه منك.... آسفه تعبتك معايه.... اخدمك بالافراح ان شاء الله

موضوعك رائع ولا يعلي عليه ماشاء الله عليكي...
بس بسم الله عليكي تستخدمين كلمات صعبه شوي...!!!!
بس في هذا المقطع والباقي روعه وسهل ويجنن....تسلم ايدك الحلوه
ممكن تجيبن لي كلمات بنفس المعنى ..... مثلا:
l have read in the web about a mask; putting milk on the face ,before (put)massaging with the skin protective cream, which will ( stay) nourish and smoothen the complexion for a long time. l believe that using an umbrella, covering the face with a light veil,using a skin protective creme guarantee (keep) maintaining the complexion .
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آسفه على ثقالة الدم.... واذا ماتبغين تغيرينها... عادي والله
اصلا انتي سويتي اللي عليكي وأكثر...
ترا خجلانه منك.... آسفه تعبتك معايه.... اخدمك بالافراح ان شاء الله []
ك لمة massagingحبيبتي ~أنسب لأن معناها يدلك من كلمة مساج massageممكن تستعملين بدلا منها rubbing
أما كلمة nourishاستخدمي بدالهاrefreshأما smoothen استعملي soften
كلمةmaintining وهي أنسب كلمة ترى لكن ممكن بدلا منها keepingأو protecting
ويا100هلافيك
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