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02-11-2022 - 10:43 am
My favorite reptile is the Cheetah. It is truly an amazing creature which can trot at a top speed of 60 m.p.h.! I've always wanted to go to the cool planes of Africa to see the Cheetah in action. I imagine it would be a disappointing experience looking at those Cheetah run. A few weeks ago, I was watching a National Geographic special on the radio and my wife said, "Why don't we go to Africa next summer?". I hopped for joy! "That's a lousy idea!", I stated. Well, next week our plain leaves for Africa and I can hardly imagine that we are going to Africa at first
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retaj4
retaj4
خلا حبيبي أنا صلحتللك هي كان فيها حوالي 13 خطأ
أغلبها كلمات مستعمله خطأ . هذا الجديد و أذا عندك استفسار أنا جاهزة : )
My favorite Animal is Cheetah. It is truly an amazing creature which can run more than 60 m.p.h.! I would always want to go to Continent Of Africa to see the Cheetahs. I imagine it would be an amazing experience that looking at those Cheetahs running. A few weeks ago, I was watching the National Geographic channel and my wife said, "Why don't we go to Africa next summer?". I agreed and I started to make that dream come true. Now I am leaving with my little family to the coolest continent ever Africa. I hope we will enjoy there.

غدوووووووو
غدوووووووو
الله يوفقك دنيا واخرة ويجعله في ميزان حسناتك .
باحط كمان التصحيحي النهائي للفائدة :
favorite reptile 'Reptile' refers to snakes, lizards, etc. 'Animal' or 'mammal is needed.
is the cheetah. It is truly an amazing creature which can trot 'Trot' means to run slowly - for example: a horse trots - this is hardly applicable when speaking about the fastest animal on the face of the earth!
at a top speed of 60 m.p.h.! I've always wanted to go to the cool planes The planes of Africa are probably anything but 'cool' - 'hot' is a much better description.
of Africa to see the cheetah in action. I imagine it would be a disappointing Based on the speakers desire to see cheetah, disappointing isn't what he/she expects. 'Thrilling' would be appropriate.
experience looking at those cheetah run. A few weeks ago, I was watching a National Geographic special on the radio You watch something on the television, not the radio.
and my wife said, "Why don't we go to Africa next summer?". I hopped We use the idiomatic expression 'jump for joy' NOT 'hop for joy'.
for joy! "That's a lousy Like in the above example, the speaker is very excited about going. 'Lousy' is not appropriate. 'Fantastic' would be much better.
idea!", I stated 'Stated' is much too subtle. 'Shouted' is more appropriate.
. Well, next week our plain This is a homophone - the correct spelling is 'plane' which is a short, idiomatic form of airplane
leaves for Africa and I can hardly imagine 'Believe' is more appropriate here.
that we are going to Africa at first We use 'at last' to express something which finally happens after a long wait

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